Expos Writing M4.2 Noticing Language

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M.4.2: Noticing Language

Read Bob Herbert’s “Jim Crow Policing.”  You will notice that Herbert uses two patterns that are especially effective in his essays: (1) the passive voice and (2) word repetition. (https://www.nytimes.com/2010/02/02/opinion/02herbert.html?_r=0)

The passive voice is applied to a verb in a sentence when the “doer” or actual “agent” of the action is after the verb in a “by” phrase or completely missing rather than before the verb. Also, a passive verb always includes a form of “be” and a past participle.

Examples: “is practiced,” “was frisked,” “has been stopped”

Agents can be added to a passive verb in a “by” phrase.

Passive: Racial profiling is practiced in New York (by the police).

Active: Police practice racial profiling in New York.

Writers often use the passive when they don’t know or don’t want to reveal the agent or “doer” of their action. Herbert relies heavily on the passive in his essay because in most cases he often doesn’t know who was responsible for the action he is calling into question.

Herbert starts his essay with a sentence in the passive voice:

“The New York City Police Department needs to be restrained” [by whom?].

1. What other passive verbs do you see in this essay? What effect does this linguistic pattern have on you as a reader?

2. Notice that all the sentences after paragraph 12 are in the active voice. What effect does this shift from passive to active voice have on the message that Herbert is delivering?

3. Herbert also repeats specific words that capture the readers’ attention and keep the focus on these particular concepts. Two examples are stop and frisk, which are repeated throughout the essay. Find three other words or parts of words that Herbert repeats in this essay. What is the effect of these repetitions?

** All this is , is reading the article and answering the 3 questions**

Peer review response

Responding to Classmates

  • Select a classmate’s thread and download his/her attached draft.
  • Reply to his/her thread to indicate the draft is under review (i.e. John Dow is currently reviewing the document).  Do not select the paper if someone else is already reviewing.
  • Read the draft carefully and respond to the questions listed below, either in a new document or at the top of your classmate’s document. At the very least, you must answer the questions, but you can also use the “Comment” function in Microsoft Word to write comments to your classmates within the essay (put your cursor where you want the comment, go to the “Review” tab in Microsoft Word, and select “New Comment”).
  • Complete the review and save the document to your computer.
  • Once you have completed the review, reply to your classmate’s thread and upload the review.

Questions for Peer Review

1. Read your peer’s essay from beginning to end just to let its ideas wash over you.  What are your initial thoughts? Did your peer satisfy the requirements of assignment?  Please explain in detail.

2. Review the essay’s title as well as its introduction and conclusion.  Think about the relationships among these three components. Do they match or do they disagree? Make note of strengths or weaknesses in these crucial areas.  Please explain in detail.

3. Find the essay’s thesis.  Is it clear? Is it well positioned? Paraphrase (put in your own words) the thesis of the essay to check your understanding. Review the assignment guidelines to ensure that your peer’s thesis is on target. Make note of strengths or weaknesses in this area. Please explain in detail.

4. Focus on the individual paragraphs of the essay.  Does each paragraph have a topic sentence that previews the ideas of the paragraph? Observe the essay’s development of paragraphs.  Does each paragraph have a single main idea that relates to the thesis?  Are there any paragraphs that seem disconnected or out of place?

5. Consider the essay’s use of the English language.  Are sentence structures, grammar, spelling, punctuation and mechanics employed effectively, or do errors distract the reader from understanding and enjoying the writer’s analysis? Make note of strengths and weaknesses in this area.  Please explain in detail.

Remember: When in doubt about how to do the peer review, be honest, helpful, and constructive. Saying “Great job! Don’t change a word!” never helped anyone to be a better writer.

Discussion

I need to reply to three classmates on a discussion post.

Each response should not be less than 100 words.

1)I believe the increase in plastic surgery by some of the most popular celebrities has influenced society in forms of eating disorders. As young kids and teenagers grow up the look up to the movie stars and entertainers on tv. If they see those people with perfect bodies they will want to be just like them. Without the resources to get fat removed or have professional chefs like celebrities due the one way to lose weight yes to not eat. Although this way isn’t a healthy option adolescences do not know this or do not understand why. I believe better knowledge at a young age to children can improve eating disorders. Kids should be educated about how celebrities get the bodies they currently have. They should also be educated on nutrition and the positive and negative affects about it. 

2)In my opinion, society has contributed to the development of various forms of disordered eating in multiple ways.  Society tells you how you should look and not how you should change habits to get this look.  Society does its best to show examples of the “perfect image” but they do not give examples of how to achieve that image.  There are so many ads and pictures showing models and making people want to change the way they look, but there are no ads to go along with them to tell the proper way to reach that body type.  Without the proper instructions on how to reach their fitness goals, people try to find their own solutions the only way they think they can.  This leads to these eating disorders.  I believe that if society did not just place an ad stating how everyone should look, and placed an ad telling how to change bad habits and lifestyles in order to be healthy and then this look would come with it, these disorders would fade out.  Another way to reduce the problem would be to stop focusing on the image that is being put out and start focusing on the health that should matter more than image, then people would be more motivated to do things the right way and live healthier lives.

3)Off the top of my head, I can see many ways that society has led to the development of various eating disorders. The largest one that comes to mind immediately to me would be the most broad and general one. That being the topic of ‘body shaming’.

In this day and age where social media is a mainstay in people’s lives, the very concept of what is considered ‘normal’ has become undefined. The kind of technology and software that can photoshop regular people to look perfect has become so readily available that it has become all you really see anymore. Because of this, the majority of the generation that develops during this time don’t  even have the chance to define a ‘normal’ for them and try to hold themselves to extreme standards to emulate these people. Such mentality can lead to disorders such as anorexia and bulimia.

Of course, there are ways to reduce the problem. However, like most things, it is easier said than done. The large majority of responsibility to solve this goes to newer generations. Self-esteem can not be given but, it can be taken away. It is important for parents to be involved and interactive during their child’s development so that their heads are not filled with the these impossible expectations. Another way would be to surround yourself with like minded people who do not care what you look like. Teenagers can be quite cruel with their words and having even just a small group of friends can be a reminder that not everyone is going to judge your entire value on your appearance.

The biggest problem with the social media ‘body shaming’ problem is that there is no clear-cut, easy way to solve it. The people who put out a falsified image of perfection for attention are not doing anything illegal and the regulation of that kind of content across social media is impractical at this point. It is up to the new generations to have will and mental fortitude to resist such influences.

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  1. Instead of posing a generic question and then preparing answers, this journal is a potential solution to community-based problem.  Here is the scenario:
    A secondary parish chapel is closed for economic reasons, but, technically, is still owned by the local church.  To raise funds, the church has decided to “rent” out the former chapel to local organizations for meetings, events or activities, since it is no longer used by the church for any religious activities (masses, weddings, prayers, etc.).  A request is made by a local theatre company to rent the chapel, in order to put on the theatre production Hair.  After some research by the church’s administrators, it is discovered the musical contains some minor language and adult situations, which could be deemed inappropriate by some members of the congregation.
    Using critical thinking skills and NOT simply stating your personal opinion, your journal assignment should answer the following:

    • do you rent the space to the theatre company?
    • why or why not?
    • Create your response, in the Assignment submission box below (not in the Comments field), as a journal or diary entry.  This response will not be read by your fellow classmates.  The journal should be 1-2 pages long, approximately 400-500 words minimum.  Researching the musical Hair most likely will be needed.   Be careful of spelling, grammar, capitalization, and punctuation…proofread and edit your work as necessary.  Please cite your sources if any are used, including any videos or links used.  This assignment will be graded according to the Journal Rubric attached.
  2. By submitting this paper, you agree: (1) that you are submitting your paper to be used and stored as part of the SafeAssign™ services in accordance with the Blackboard Privacy Policy; (2) that your institution may use your paper in accordance with your institution’s policies; and (3) that your use of SafeAssign will be without recourse against Blackboard Inc. and its affiliates.

Academic Plan

  First, go to https://www.grantham.edu/m/catalog.pdf  and select three general education courses that you feel are significant to a college student’s education. 

Then create a tri-fold brochure in which you explain why it is essential that a college student complete each one of these courses.  Be creative; use pictures associated with attending college.  Your brochure should be a professional document; grammar, spelling, and punctuation are important.

Use the brochure template to develop your tri-fold brochure.  NOTE: While this layout does not seem to make sense if you view it as a flat Word document, recall that the final product would be folded.

Here are the guidelines for presenting your information. The pages of the linked template have been labeled to help you organize your brochure.

·  COVER

o  This is the front cover of the brochure.

o  Create an interesting title and include relevant artwork – entice the viewer to open the brochure.

·  PAGE TWO

o  This is the first page the viewer sees upon opening the brochure.

o  In your own words, provide an overview of the General Education program.

·  PAGE THREE

o  List the first general education course

o  Use your own words to explain why this course is essential

·  PAGE FOUR

o  List the second general education course

o  Use your own words to explain why this course is essential

·  PAGE FIVE

o  List the third general education course.

o  Use your own words to explain why this course is essential.

·  PAGE SIX

o  This is the back cover of the brochure.

 o  Feel free to add artwork or other information on this column. 

writing paper

 

https://www.southuniversity.edu/whoweare/newsroom/blog/mobile-phones-and-society-how-being-constantly-connected-impacts-our-lives-137313

http://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0179802

https://sites.psu.edu/siowfa14/2014/09/07/the-affects-cell-phones-have-on-social-skills/

https://www.psychologytoday.com/blog/mental-mishaps/201401/cell-phones-are-changing-social-interaction

http://scholarworks.uno.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=2871&context=td

http://www.nyu.edu/classes/keefer/waoe/miakotkol.pdf

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4291831/

http://www.newsactivist.com/en/articles/kaldors-intro-sociology-fall-2013/how-have-cell-phones-impacted-teenagers-socialization

https://www.elon.edu/docs/e-web/academics/communications/research/vol6no1/02DragoEJSpring15.pdf

https://greatergood.berkeley.edu/article/item/how_smartphones_are_killing_conversation  

These are 10 articles, I want a summary of each no more than 1 paragraph in 24 hours 

I want it to be very SIMPLE words but very good grammer

essay 2200-2400 words (total, including the title page, table of contents, quotations, footnotes, and bibliography), in current Turabian format, that combines the insights and arguments.

Begin your paper with a brief introductory paragraph that clearly states what positions you are going to argue for. State what metaethic you will defend, the issue in applied ethics to which you will be applying it, and the conclusion(s) on that issue that you want to defend. 

Next provide a lengthy and detailed explanation of your metaethic. This will likely reflect the metaethic that you argued for in your Discussion Board Three thread and the feedback that you received from the classmate or classmates who responded to your thread. Here you can go into much more detail than you could in the Discussion Board, which was limited to 600 words. If you use half of your paper to develop your metaethic, then it will contain approximately 1100 words, which means that it will be roughly twice as long as your Discussion Board thread was. 

Once you have fully explicated and argued for your metaethic, proceed to an application of that metaethic to the applied ethics issue that you discussed in your Discussion Board Four thread. This discussion may end up being twice as long as your discussion board thread was. Add detail, nuance, and argumentation, providing a fairly complete and comprehensive argument for approaching the issue the way that you do. You may illustrate the issue with real-life examples, but please do not fill your paper with anecdotes. You should anticipate possible objections to your approach to the issue and respond to them in an objective and informed manner. (For ideas on how others might object to your approach, a good place to begin would be your classmate’s reply to your DB4 thread, but you needn’t stop there. Your own imagination and the many books and articles that have been published on issues in applied ethics can provide a wealth of possible arguments relevant to every issue.)

Your final paragraph(s) should reflect that you have accomplished your thesis. It should recap what you have accomplished and how you have accomplished it. 

Proposal Argument Essay

  

Proposal Argument Essay Assignment

Assignment adapted from Chapter 7 of the textbook.

A Policy Proposal as a Guest Editorial 

Write a 1,500-1,750-word policy proposal related to the sale, trade, or donation of human organs using five to seven academic resources. The policy proposal should be suitable for publication as an editorial in a college or city newspaper or in a publication associated with a particular group, such as a church newsletter or employee bulletin. The voice and style of your argument should be aimed at readers of your chosen publication. Remember to not use first person pronouns (I, me, us, we, our, my, mine) or second person pronouns (you, your, yours) in this guest editorial writing, unless given permission by your instructor. 

Your editorial should have the following features:

1. Identify the problem related to the sale, trade, or donation of human organs.

  1. Persuade the audience that you have selected that this is a problem that needs solving; give it  presence.
  2. Propose  action offering specific details to show how the actions will help alleviate  the problem.
  3. Justify  your solution; the reasons why your audience should accept your proposal and act on it.

This essay is NOT simply a persuasive essay on organ sale, trade, or donation. It is an argumentative proposal that offers a practical and justifiable solution to a problem related to organ donation. 

First Draft Grading

· You will receive completion points for the first draft based upon the successful submission of a complete draft. 

· Because your first draft is a completion grade, do not assume that this grade reflects or predicts the final grade. If you do not consider your instructor’s comments, you may be deducted points on your final draft. 

 

Sources

· Include in-text citations and a references page in GCU Style for FIVE to SEVEN scholarly sources outside of class texts.

· These sources should be used to support any claims you make and should be present in the text of the essay. 

· Use the GCU Library to help you find sources.

· Include this research in the paper in a scholarly manner.

Format

APA

Turnitin

· Must pass with less than 5%

PSY 420 Week 4

     Choose a target behavior for your Week 5 Self-Management Project.

 

        Write a 175-word summary on the target behavior in observable and measurable terms.             Include the methods that will be used to observe and acquire baseline data.

 

PART II.

 

Respond to the following questions in 175 to 250 words each.

 

  1. Choose a behavior you would like to shape on someone you know. Select a terminal and initial behavior and the steps you would use to shape the behavior. Would you utilize punishment or reinforcement? Would fixed or variable outcomes play a role in your procedure?

2. Choose a task that you would teach a 5-year-old child to perform. Consider some of the following:

tying shoe laces, brushing teeth, making a sandwich, making a bed, and so forth. What would your

task analysis look like? For example, what would the steps be and how many steps would you

have? Once you develop the task analysis, what might you do before putting it into place to ensure

its effectiveness?

  1. You just taught a shy 2nd-grade student how to ask for help when he needed it on his vocabulary sight words rather than sitting quietly and not completing his work. However, you want the behavior to occur in other settings when he needs help. What process would you follow to teach him how to ask for help in multiple contexts?

  1. Conversly, one of the 2nd-grade boy’s classmates is raising her hand and asking for help even on tasks she knows how to complete. This happens during recess, in phys ed, or when given a task she has completed multiple times before. What process would you follow to teach when and where raising her hand is appropriate?

Researched Argument Rough Draft

 (Need in 6 Hours) 100% plagiarism free!!! 

Throughout this course, we have been focusing our attention on the practice of arguing to find meaning. Because of that, it is important to practice balancing opposing viewpoints of a single issue. This essay allows you the chance to do just that.

Much of the writing you will be doing throughout your academic and professional career will be argumentative; thus, this essay will help you to hone your rhetorical skills in several ways:

  • First, this essay will help you to establish an environment of civilized discourse within your writing (essential for productive argumentation);
  • Secondly, this essay will allow you to practice your research skills in both identifying and integrating sound arguments;
  • And thirdly, this essay gives you a chance to practice your critical thinking skills—skills you will need for success throughout your academic and professional life.

Remember, the purpose of this essay is not to prove whether you are right or wrong, but instead prove that you can fairly present two sides of an argument and logically determine the best solution to the problem you are faced with. With that in mind, we ask that you withhold your personal opinion, personal judgments of the material, or personal narrative until the concluding remarks of your essay.

*Note that no one writes a polished essay in a single sitting. Start early and give yourself time for multiple revisions.

The rough draft of your essay should meet the following guidelines:

  • includes direct quotations and paraphrased passages from four or more scholarly texts representing more than one side of the issue;
  • qualifies each of the authors (authors representing each side of the debate should have compatible credibility);
  • withholds personal opinion until the conclusion of the essay;
  • is written clearly, concisely, and accurately;
  • is written primarily in third-person;
  • includes a References page;
  • has been closely edited so that it contains few or no mechanical errors.

Researched Argument Checklist: Use this to evaluate your rough draft against the assignment requirements:

  • Does this essay present a clear argument on a topic?
  • Does this essay treat two sides of the argument equally and fairly?
  • Does the essay cite, at minimum, four scholarly sources?
  • Are the authors for the articles qualified? Who are they? Use signal phrases/attributive tags to introduce the authors.
  • What is the purpose of this essay? What does it do to meet that purpose? How effective is the argument?
  • Does this essay avoid second person language and limit first person language?
  • Are there elements of pathos, ethos, and logos in this essay? Do these appeals work together to propose a solution?
  • Does the essay avoid logical fallacy in the reasoning behind the solution?
  • Does the essay use APA in-text citation and is there an APA format references page?